![]() ![]() "I signed the paperwork to use one of the chambers, and Sera and I stepped inside. But that's like 10% of the book and the rest is inconsistent, repetitive, convoluted for no reason, bogged down with descriptions of things that never matter (and often change the next time they come up, if they ever do), and full of so many continuity errors that you'd think it was written by committee and never proofread, let alone edited, before publication.Įven without the constantly shifting and inconsistent magic system, the total lack of consistency in what the main character (and 1st person narrator) knows, and the magical items that work completely differently chapter to chapter (like, full on totally different and contradictory mechanisms, mechanics, etc etc, on the same item, depending on the page), there's still the repetitive writing style with the same phrases being used, overused, and then used again until you want to rip the author to shreds and lend him a bloody phrase book.ĪND THEN! There's the aggressively redundant bits. The author is half decent at writing a dungeon crawl. In fact, I mostly finished it because I started hate reading and playing the "when's the next continuity error" drinking game. ![]()
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